Victoria Revay, I think your story has potential but needs some improvement. I've got a few suggestions, and if you give them a try, I'd be happy to remove this flag.
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at 15:00 on October 24th, 2007
Victoria Revay, I think your story has potential but needs some improvement. I've got a few suggestions, and if you give them a try, I'd be happy to remove this flag.
Can you fill in some details here? We want to know more...and I know you have more to say on this topic... :)