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by mehrajmir | January 1, 2008 at 12:03 am
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A Kashmiri girl displaying her hands decorated with henna ahead of Eid-al-Fitr Festival in Srinagar, the summer capital of Indian Kashmir. Muslims will be celebrating Eid, depending on the appearance of the moon, marking the end of the holy month of Ramadan.
pic:- Mehraj Mir.
January 1, 2008 at 12:03 am by mehrajmir, 391 views, 1 comment
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ryanat 08:18 on January 1st, 2008
mehrajmir, i think you have the potential for a fascinating news story here but it still needs a little work. Firstly, the headline should be more direct in describing the content of the story rather than one of the photos. To me, the most interesting thing is the upcoming celebration and how it is observed. So perhaps you could try and headline like: Muslims Prepare for Holiday of Eid-al-Fitr, or something like that. For more tips about how to make this a better news story check out our j-tips in the newsroom.