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Between the ages of 35 -40 a woman is like France. She is half destroyed after the war but still desirable........click to read more.
October 13, 2008 at 07:58 am by saraqureshi, 137 views, 2 comments
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at 08:04 on October 13th, 2008
saraqureshi, I think your story has potential but needs some improvement. I've got a few suggestions, and if you give them a try, I'd be happy to remove this flag.
I wasnt sure what was newsworthy in this story. News should always be about posting current stuff - new things you've discovered.
Please review What Makes News News. It can really help if you follow the old "W5" news formula -- making sure you have answered the questions: Who? What? Where? When? And Why? (You might want to check out our J-Tips for more help.)
at 08:44 on October 13th, 2008
No it is not funny. It's misogynist, racist, and deeply offensive. And as Terri says, no, it's not news.