Der Strand Hut

by perlenschmuck | August 29, 2008 at 02:06 am | 61 views | 1 comment | 0 recommendations

Unique Meer Ferienhäuser

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Sanjay Jha
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at 02:59 on August 29th, 2008

perlenschmuck, I think your story has potential but needs some improvement. I've got a few suggestions, and if you give them a try, I'd be happy to remove this flag.

I wasnt sure what was newsworthy in this story. News should always be about posting current stuff - new things you've discovered.

Please review What Makes News News. It can really help if you follow the old "W5" news formula -- making sure you have answered the questions: Who? What? Where? When? And Why? (You might want to check out our J-Tips for more help.)

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August 29, 2008 at 02:06 am by perlenschmuck, 61 views, 1 comment

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